Homework 12/05/17 – character description

New Picture (2)

Ancient Egypt

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  1. aiza says:

    He had he brown skin like chcocolate and blue and gold metal on his bald head with thick metal on his chin.He has a rare necklace that’s very fragile and his wifes got black hair with shiny golden ends that look like strings of gold.The eyeliner on her eyes is as blue as the sea water.

    • 021orchardj says:

      I’m pleased you’ve used a simile.

      Try to use some prepositions as fronted adverbials to give you more variety of sentence openers.

      Around his neck,
      On his head,

      Mr Orchard.

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